Sugar coated candy
sweetens loving lips
all the trickles of sweet sugar
that fall upon your hips
It slips away
in the morning light
and it drifts away
so deep into the night
The rain upon my pane
I’t’s just insane
This whole fucked up world
is driving me insane
Can’t forget the smile
that was never meant for you
Though you wish it was
there’s nothing you can do
Bleed upon the page
the words have been written
red may be the color
but blue has been bitten
Yes I sigh
unforgiving cry
in your eye
bye bye, bye bye
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired Contest by ZachP.
400 points, ended October 12, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice sweet piece of poetry Karl!! I enjoyed what I read here...THANKS!!!
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The first stanza is catchy, and the rest of the poem is just excellent Very well written, I liike it very much. Good luck!
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