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Contemplating...

I feel indifferent
I feel unimportant
I feel like I do not matter
I don't know how to help
There's nothing I can do
Just sit here and wait
I slump over
Trying to be optimistic
I hold on to everything I hold dear
I feel numb
Like I cannot picture anything
My mind goes blank
All I can do
Is just sit here and wait

Author notes

just trying to figure out how I'm feeling

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    I think because it is such a short piece, the repetition detracts from the piece. Most of your opening lines are the same or very similar.


  • Kiwi Grimm
    October 19, 2008
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    i really really really

    love this