the lovely dew in the morning,
the fresh scent of rain,
the berry in your kisses,
pains you keep in refrain
your passion is my mountain,
wondrous hearts are hard to settle,
when your hair brushes softly upon my face,
I am as fragile as a rose petal
soft, knowing smiles dominate my mind
security found in shadowy embraces,
comforting colors appease all senses,
when you've memorized their glorious faces
Author notes
6. Brushes softly upon my face
12 lines roundabout
In a list
A contest entry
- Won Gold in contest PIFhttp://allpoetry.com/contest/2422655 hosted by Penman winner to play forward 300 points by Topaze.
900 points, ended October 11, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Such a beautiful flowing take on the prompt, soft, caressing and passionate. As always, you pen magic. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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This is amazing the second write of yours that I have adored tonight goodluck with it in the contest but you should not need it be well
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Excellent, a fine entry in this contest.
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