You are so cold ever since
and now I am trying to warm you
with my bestest touch of love
Mmmhhh
Nothing going to stop me -
as I can not wait no more
I'm yours from the beginning
Well, what can I say
just open your heart
and you'll find
my love for you
hitherto with no hoax
Believe that
I'm yours and
you're mine
and
this this this
is our fate
Author notes
I’m yours – Jason Mraz
I use this song as my ring back tone in my cellphone - so everytime you call me you will hear this nice song 
A contest entry
- 50 songs for all you music lovers by miss-princess.
400 points, ended October 16, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i like this to a certain extent. It seems like your using to much of the original song. Good luck in the contest
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Excellent. no doubt where your heart is. I am happy for you, for where the heart is, love resides also. Well done.
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the original song is excellent - I am just refer to it
thanks for reviewing
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This is awesome you did a very fabulous job with this write!! Its beautiful all the way around!! You did an excellent job portraying this write!! Its amazing!! I love it!!
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Thank you very much Princess ... for your encouraging words
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