Liar, liar, pants on fire
I thought you would lift me higher
Instead you smothered me inside
And part of me quite nearly died
Liar, liar, you require
Too much for your own desire
How long were you playing me
Before I first began to see
Liar, liar, fakes for hire
I never was your love's supplier
Look at you--you've turned away
You kissed somebody else today
Liar, liar, pants on fire
Your future's consequence is dire
Keep it up, you won't survive
Your heart won't make it out alive
Author notes
Written 10/01/08
Does it flow well? Could you feel the emotion?
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Great poem. Good flow with the changing first lines. I really like it. It is cool that someone can write like this.
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I love this! Very strong emotion and very funny. Keep it flowing
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Sounds like you want a hitman!!
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Lol!
That'd be really funny!
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Lairs, come in all shapes and sizes, sadly some have the same motive. you have a strong emotion in this poem, keep it flowing
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