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Explaination of Her Death

my, my, my
what have we here
a pretty little girl
in her finest wear
with long brown hair
and Crystal blue eyes
its sad that today's her last chance
to say her goodbyes
for tomorrow isn't promised
to everyone , old and young the same
and this girl wont see tomorrow
this fact in time cannot change
death indeed will find her
when this little girl
loses her way
she wont die in fear
though she'll feel every ounce of pain
she'll know its her time has come to let go
with nothing to gain
she'll say what she can
hoping well understand
she wont be gone forever
for she'll be watching in the clouds above
she'll be watching the over the ones
she will always love
and on her tombstone
looking over her grave
she wants it to say-so everyone will know
because of alcohol, my life couldn't be saved

Author notes

this poem is about a little girl who died because someone was drinking and driving... which is wrong...

i choose choice #1
Written January 24th, 2004

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  • Jenna3377
    January 26, 2004
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    awww this is very sad
    an yet it happens all the time..
    a very sad write good job
    an good luck in the contest
    ~Jen~