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curled up around Masters leg this one contemplates

she crawled to His feet,
and curled around His leg.
she felt safe there,
the collar wrapped snugly
against her throat.
A sign of constant devotion,
and consent.
He absent mindedly petted her head,
and He was rewarded with a purr, and a mew.
her life was in His strong capable hands.
she was His slave His beautiful piece
of chocolate property.
she worshipped Him,
His thoughts, His decisions,
His protection.
she breathed in His life
accepted the caring look
that only He and she shared.
His eyes so intense it made her
incoherent.
Capitivated by His voice
the most simple command made Her nether
region moist.
His voice broke her thought
" present."
He commanded,
shifting to her knees
arching her ass
displayed.
her knees apart, wrists
crossed and head bent down.
she felt hot tears stream down her face.
she felt vundereable and beautiful.
her Masters presence overhelming.
she concentrated on the left shoe that now
apppeared.
Masters voice spoke again,
" Worship"
she changed positions
kissing His clothed foot
gingerly touching and carressing
His legs.
her mind hurling, her body on fire.
Ultimate submission. Master grabbed
her collar and pulled her up.
His tongue invaded her mouth whispering
naughty bits of comfort.
she felt free in His collar,
to do what she did best.
Love and submit.

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  • Spooky Mind
    July 30
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    Always

    Ill always have a weak spot for these poems, and you nailed it. thank you.


  • Uniquely-Scarred
    October 25, 2008
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    wow beautiful read i loved the chocolate bit good good read keep it up take care

  • lilmissvixen
    October 6, 2008
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    Fantastic

    Wow................ one sub to another this is exactly as i feel.


  • SubKitten
    October 4, 2008
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    Beautifully done!

    The ending, talking about the "worship" command was very nice, and actually made me a bit jealous. :-P mine won't allow me that kinda thing, says it makes Him feel too powerful.

    Is very wonderfully done, and descriptive. i liked it a lot.


    • Mozarts funeral gold member
      October 4, 2008
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      fluffytarasub ((cute!!!!)) i'm sure you worship Him in your own way and He knows this. i just gave Master this piece tonight so i hope that He loves it!!!!


      • my masters slave
        February 12
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        wow brilliant writing.im sure when you gave your Master this truly wonderful piece of poetry,he was very appreciative.i know i would have been


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    being collared sets the soul free, serving a Master, gives one the right to be whom they are deep down inside.


  • x.DesolatedxStar.x
    October 3, 2008

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    Hun, this is a very powerful, beautifully written poem.
    "She felt free in his collar, to do with what she did best, Love and submit."

    That is my favorite... cause this is excatly how i feel.. )


  • Sheli silver member
    October 3, 2008
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    POWERFUL!

    You are! WOW! what an amazing poem!

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