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Losing You

I was energized
Magnitized
Enigmatic
Wonderful
In your eyes before they closed
Slammed shut forever

I asked me if you’d catch me when I fell
And you promised you would
I broke your arms
It’s too bad
I was so enjoying being the damsel in distress

No one likes a clingy overdramatic spaz
No matter how straight her features are
If she’s not too fat or too skinny
If she has an air of mystery
She’s just a shinier piece of trash littering the gutter
Never forget that

You finally managed to do it
To rip off the pretty and expose the festering wounded shell of a girl I really am

I told you that I was just a girl
A terrible, ridiculous, hideous, unsteady girl
Ready to fall
Why didn’t you believe me?
Just don’t blame me
I warned you long ago
And you didn’t listen

Shying away from the burning intensity?
Where’d you go doll?
And why are you already forgetting about me?
What happened to loving me forever?
You promised.
I’m not going to act like it doesn’t hurt
I promised never to lie to you
But I never promised that it wouldn’t tear a hole
Too big to close

I guess I should be happy
It lasted longer than I ever expected
But god I’m gonna miss you

Author notes

bah,
boys... they can't be trusted.
I thought I loved him, but it was just how he looked in the light.

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  • Cyanide Milkshake
    October 4, 2008
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    'I thought I loved him, but it was just how he looked in the light' you should make a poem based on that, its a great line XD
    Bah at many boys indeed, but one day you'll find one that doesn't scare so easy.

    Losers, lol.

    'i asked you if you’d catch me when I fell
    And you promised you would
    I broke your arms
    It’s too bad'

    Love that part
    xxx


    • Miss Belligerence
      October 4, 2008
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      that line "I thought I loved him but it was just how he looked in the light" is amazing, I agree. But honestly it's not mine.
      and.... it's a lyric from fall out boy.
      I'm ashamed... lol