The description that comes to mind
Is the modern day baby daddy kind
Ten kids or more in the same neighborhood
That whole concept I never understood
What were the babies mama’s thinking
Don’t tell me he was that good at hoodwinking
Self esteem comes in to play at least it should
Then it wouldn’t be so many deadbeat dads in the hood
Don’t forget that sorry a@# no good man
Who loves to use his oh so masculine hands
To show his woman and child how bad he can be
By consistently abusing his entire family
If someone equal to him in stature and strength
He would run so fast never raising a hand against
A coward hiding behind his obvious brutality
This injustice really is inexcusable and enrages me
This is my definition of big time losers
Deadbeat Dad’s, Women and Children Abusers
A contest entry
- What is your definition of a LOSER???? PW..PW..PW Maybe it's you yourself. by echo-ink.
470 points, ended October 21, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is a great poem. It is filled with truthand wisom. The reader can feel the anger you have towards these kind of dads. Great job!
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and for the kindness of your comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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AMEN,
So much truth spoken in your write.
Finals, 'nough said, and I hate them too.
Bell,
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Thank you so omuch for taking the time to commetnt God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Wonderful
Very creative and well expressed. A marvelous poem for the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
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Word! Way too many of them these days!
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Thank you very much penman I always enjoy hearing from you and your lovely comments. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. God Bles, Jo-Ann
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Rolls nicely. :-) Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you for taking the time to read and commenting. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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