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Death of a Butterfly

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I watched you as you hatched from your cacoon in my jar...
transformed and triumphant, you have come very far!
you have survived the cruelty of winter and mean children
trustingly, patiently developing for when spring comes in

Beautiful butterfly, drying your wings in the sun...
your short life ahead will be filled with great fun!
you have changed and are reborn from the winter before
now you have wings with which in the blue sky to soar!

Delicate soul  so colorful and free...
flying past a lake and over a tree
dancing among flowers carefree and gay
not knowing there's only a few weeks to play

Sweet little butterfly, so graceful and bright
with soft wings that shine in the sun's golden light!
for your protection and well-being I pray
you are so amazing and fragile in every single way!

Exquisite one, please always stay!
you make my heart sing along my way
giving my eyes wonder and beauty to behold
inside me, everything wonderful begins to unfold!

Poor butterfly your end is near...
come rest on my breast, have no fear!
my tears fall as I watch life slowly leave you...
you grow weak but are brave and I try to be too

You will go someplace where life is more fair...
where happiness and freedom all beings can share
I grow faint as I watch the last of life leave you
and as you die, my hope begins to die too

I gently lay you in a soft silk-lined box
and bury you among the daisies and hollyhocks
I cry as I softly say for you a prayer
that you are somewhere less cruel and more fair






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Author notes

I know it is sad; but in death there is rebirth, and in rebirth; transformation. Karen

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  • silver-girl
    November 1

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    So beautiful!1 I love butterflies; so fragile, so pretty, so strong & brave--I wish I could be that way, myself!! Thank you for your comment on my poem My Black Cat--yes, she DID own me! Beautiful, beautiful poem here!!!

  • Perfect


    so meek dear.Butterfly representing hope and joy. they are enlightening the universe and making of it a colorful one. Thanks for such a beutiful writing..You rebirth happiness in Enchanted Legacy.

    Take a deep birth I will add you as a favourite poet

  • Impressive work... (as always)

    Soft narrative with a skipping rhyme scheme & flawless rhythm & flow...
    Beautifully done with a life time lived in 8 gentle, loving verses...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!

    • "Beautifully done with a life time lived in 8 gentle, loving verses..."

      as usual thank you for your thoughtful comment on my poetry. We should all be so blessed as the Butterfly. At least they truely live during their brief duration here among the flowers.

      karen


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    The butterfly always reminds of rebirth. from a caterpillar to a butterfly
    your imagery is truly lovely
    every words is exquisite
    well done my friend
    God bless you...


    • kareneisenlord gold member
      October 6, 2008
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      Yes, Butterflies do symbolize rebirth and transformation

      They also represent the throat chakra and the thyroid gland, which I find rather interesting because I have thyroid problems, and I wasn't allowed to express myself growing up. Butterflies represent freedom from cruelty and oppression to me, as well. They mean the liberty to express oneself to me. The meanings are endless; but this is a start. Thank you for your comment! I really appreciate it. Blessings, Karen


  • poeticcaresses
    October 2, 2008

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    It's beautiful. A true song of nature; it's wrath AND it's beauty. Very well written. A great story and a great poem. Thank you for entering!


    • kareneisenlord gold member
      October 6, 2008
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      Thank you!

      And I truly appreciate the gold trophy on this. This poem is so close to my heart and soul. I did really do this as a child of around eight years old. Kept a cacoon in a jar, that I had saved from a group of boys who were smashing them up agains a wall; and after about two weeks it hatched.

      The ending in real life was beautiful because I simply set it free after the wings were dry enough. The warmth and love that I felt in my heart when the butterfly flew from my open window to it's freedom, will never be forgotten.

      I found out in later years that butterflies don't live very long. Your words sum it up in what you say about Nature; "it's wrath AND it's beauty." Thank you again for your lovely contest, your nice feedback and the trophy! Karen


    • kareneisenlord gold member
      October 2, 2008
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      Oh, wow - you're fast!

      I am still working on it. Please look at it again in about five minutes. Just now finishing some editing and things. lol's

      • poeticcaresses
        October 2, 2008
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        Might want to change your text to white or bold it with the new background.


        • kareneisenlord gold member
          October 2, 2008
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          I tried the white again; which I liked initially; but a little too hard to read I think. Went with a dark green. Hope you like it! karen


        • kareneisenlord gold member
          October 2, 2008
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          Thank you!

          I took longer than I expected to edit it. I'll try the white with the bold and see if that works better. Added a photo. Thank you for you patience and the input! Karen

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