The rhythmic tears splash upon her shoe.
From those harsh words cutting her heart.
He has the most heartless soul ever known to have.
He used to treat her with care, kindness… When did this all start?
A face so pure, a heart so loving, a soul so innocent.
He does not care, he loves the stomping, the breaking, the betraying.
She has been pushed about too many times, too many heartless times.
A hand slapping, words chomping, a soul… dead.
He is the biggest loser of all time.
A contest entry
- What is your definition of a LOSER???? PW..PW..PW Maybe it's you yourself. by echo-ink.
470 points, ended October 21, 2008, 14 entries
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Yup. I agree 100 %
Sometimes the biggest losers are those so selfish they can't see beyond their own up-turned nose.
Bell,
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Thanks alot for the comment!
<3.
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To hurt the heart is injuring self.
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Thanks for commenting! And I agree. :}
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you just described my dad
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Oh, that really sucks. :[. I'm sorry to hear that. I hope things get better, though.. Thanks for commenting.
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that is a good definition of a loser in my oppinion
this reminded me of myself all too much
loved it!
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Oh wow, thank you so much XD
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