summer sun disappears
in blue winds
and the ocean calls out to swallow us
in one love
floating on cold waves
I fall deeper
in your eyes
filled with sweet intimacy
between whirlpools of little miss teasing
your hands swirl firm
holding me
on bed of rocks
and sea shells echo-
I love you
with hush of breeze
gliding through my soft hair locks
then our lips meet
for once more
sinking in golden landscape
of beauty
And again
till the horizon seems to fade
Please tell me what you think
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incredible softness, a mix of passion and innocence hiding behind words destined to tease the mind into caverns of imagination where, suddenly, all is permitted. beautiful.


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Lovely poem


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What a klovely lovely poem!!!! simply beautiful dear
wow! I am smitten

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SO SWEET!!!!!
There is nothing quite like the ocean to bring out that sweet and wonderful feeling of love.
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I am as green as that ocean. What a lucky guy! Beautiful words princess. I am sure he appreciates them, as much as others will enjoy reading them. Very peaceful, very loving... very nice.


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