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summer sun disappears
in blue winds
and the ocean calls out to swallow us
in one love

floating on cold waves
I fall deeper
in your eyes
filled with sweet intimacy

between whirlpools of little miss teasing
your hands swirl firm
holding me
on bed of rocks

and sea shells echo-
I love you
with hush of breeze
gliding through my soft hair locks

then our lips meet
for once more
sinking in golden landscape
of beauty

And again
till the horizon seems to fade

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  • mimiagatha
    February 7

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    incredible softness, a mix of passion and innocence hiding behind words destined to tease the mind into caverns of imagination where, suddenly, all is permitted. beautiful.


  • Ellis gold member
    December 6, 2008
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    Lovely poem


  • Swan song gold member
    November 27, 2008
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    What a klovely lovely poem!!!! simply beautiful dear
    wow! I am smitten


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 2, 2008

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    SO SWEET!!!!!

    There is nothing quite like the ocean to bring out that sweet and wonderful feeling of love. 's


  • David J Martin gold member
    October 2, 2008

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    I am as green as that ocean. What a lucky guy! Beautiful words princess. I am sure he appreciates them, as much as others will enjoy reading them. Very peaceful, very loving... very nice.

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