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Keep me safe

The days ....
They seem so long
The nights .....
They never end.
My dreams ....
They fade so quick.
My Love ....
That is all I have.
All that I can keep.
For to be without
My Love so true
My heart would not beat.
My lunges would not inhale.

So long, to the world
I would say.
But for now My Love is strong
And though my days ...
My nights ....
My dreams .....
Are all out of my control,
Until My Love reaches
Their bounds of unreach
I will keep living
Basking in the light,
Ever shining and warm,
That My Love and I create

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  • PhadraigMcShane
    February 27

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    i like the formatting of the "My nights...." "My Dreams..."

    It makes you stop and think about what those words mean to ourselves.