Unmasked

Unmask your beauty to the moon

and put her to shame
Eyes bright and shining like sapphire stars
Glisten far more brilliantly then any light in the heavens

Whisper to the song bird

and let his songs fade...into Awe

Words soft and sweet like music in the wind

Lips speak far more beautifully then any note in nature

Unmasked from the shadows

you're an angel

glowing so bright

you put all thats beautiful to shame

Author notes

A line from Hamlet inspired me to write this...it's not about anyone spacific....it's just a poem about a beauty so beautiful that all things fall to shame in it's presents. No spacific gender btw....! Enjoy

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Rhiannon-Rose
June 29
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'aw ' is spelt awe. LOL.
But apart from that, great poem!
(:
Mr. Alternative
June 23

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EXCRUTIATINGLY REMARKABLE!
O. . .M. . .G! LOL! THIS POEM IS UNBELIEVABLE. YOU ARE TRULY GIFTED IN THIS FIELD OF LITERATURE. I THINK YOU AND YOUR POETRY IS WITHOUT QUESTION ONE OF THE BEST ON THIS SITE! I DON'T WANNA GIVE YOU A BIG HEAD. . .LMAO! BUT I CAN'T HELP BUT EXPRESS HOW GORGEOUS AND ELEGANT THIS PIECE IS! IT'S EVEN BETTER THAN THE LAST ONE I READ AND I GENUINELY ENJOYED THAT ONE! AND EVEN THOUGH I WRITE ABOUT EVERYTHING I'M A FANTASY-GUY SO I CONNECT WITH THIS PIECE SO SO MUCH MORE! THERE'S REALLY NOTHING FOR ME LEFT TO SAY ABOUT YOU OR THIS PIECE EXCEPT. . .MEZMERIZING CONFIDENCE.
xeroabyss II
October 6, 2008
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Such beauty is what has driven humanity to create love and poetry.
xDemonicxAngelx
October 2, 2008

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Oh wow! What a beautiful write! I adored this and the background is so pretty! I genuinley thought that this was amazing

You did an incredible job with this! Keep up the fantastic work

Take care