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Grandiose

I am she the tree holds me
Woven in lusty limbs clinging to me
I am all I can be adore what I see
Leaves take flight and abandon me

A contest entry

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    Nicely done. Excellent ending to a great image you paint! Thanks so much for entering my contest. Be proud of your work! It’s an honor to have it shown here!


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    October 2, 2008

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    Ooooo, very interesting, I really liked this one. I really liked the last line, was a good ending for it.

    I wish you the best of luck in the contest Keep up the good work.

    Take care