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Star Storm

His vision was artistic,
His song modern and classic,
With the sounding of heavens music-
His life, a circle of magic.
One ardency day he became wise,
After seeking the truth 1000 times,
And claimed to be loved by an angel-
His horizon was boundless,
With no moon, and starless,
Neither was there the light of sun-
There in the mountains,
High above a wavering sea,
He truned his dreams into reality,
He planted a vineyard,
For his beloved,
In the instant that his soul became,
A fiery-ardency,
Star-storm,
Surrounded by Lighting-
Messengers,
Leading the way...

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 2, 2008

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    You took your mood from this world to that world linking and amplifying the beauty of your loveful thoughts..a wonderful poetry indeed...