I weep the tissues away
in sorrows dull jasper's,
over aching pangs, so vivid
into nights of endless wrestle,
to days taunted and blue,
raked in bald dull drums
my heart pounds profusely
in hope you may vision me and you.
Will these thoughts apply
or shall years of lonely
structure near me to the end.
Author notes
2. Do my thoughts apply
A contest entry
- Won Gold in contest PIFhttp://allpoetry.com/contest/2422655 hosted by Penman winner to play forward 300 points by Topaze.
900 points, ended October 11, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great piece!
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Very good entry and wonderful imagery. I enjoyed reading your chosen prompt and your outlook on it.
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You ladies are blowing me away, I'm rocking in my socks.
Thank you for this finest entry in my contest.
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A wonderful writ. I loved the depth and imagery packed in this powerful and ponderous piece. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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I quite liked this. Short, simple, and straight to the point
Keep up the good work. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Take care
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