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a dream of a dream

cover my eyes in darkness.
to create this moment with you.
your eyes staring into the truth.
there is nowhere left to hide.
your embrace calms my doubt.
this was meant to be.
one simple kiss,
my every fear falls to pieces.
ecstasy rushes over me.
in your eyes, in this moment,
i am complete.

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