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The mixed up poem

The sun it shines to find.
The fire that’s a lier with a buyer.
Then the day trippir trips on a ripper.
The ripper riped a page for a writer.
That fell in a sell in a submarine.
Then he was in chanes next to Lanes.



One Lane said hello he said I want jello.
The submarine go’s across the universe to find the moon sun.
Tad  is sad to leave yorguia and georgia.
Kit has a tooth that is loose that is bad for Kit and thuraya.
Kit’s afro is magno for magnum.
Well tad just lays and waits for Georgia to come.

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    October 18, 2008

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    A creative piece that brings to mind nights when I just plain didn't get enough sleep.

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  • sultan gold member
    October 3, 2008
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    Very cute ...

    Very creative.