So you thought that you could get away with hurting me
Going behind my back thinking I would never see
You couldn't stand being away from her
So your dreams with me are ended forever
You're a cheater and a loser
Not to mention you're a user
You've lost all my respect,
Yeah, I'm being direct
Well newsflash you freak
Your future looks bleak
You'll never get another girl
My mind is starting to whirl
You think you're all that
Thinking your tough with hand-to-hand combat
You don't have the guts
Afraid you'll get kicked in the nuts?
So wake up you jerk,
Before I start to go berserk.
I don't want to see your face,
Go throw yourself into outer space
Yes, I'm angry and hurt,
But thank you for teaching me to be more alert
I can move on with my life now,
And sorry, but you don't need to know how.
Author notes
I recently found out my fiance was cheating on me... needless to say we're over, I thought this was a good way to get it out 
~Tabitha~
A contest entry
- What is your definition of a LOSER???? PW..PW..PW Maybe it's you yourself. by echo-ink.
470 points, ended October 21, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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not feeling it
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I know ive been there and ive done that... i know cheaters suck bad
i like y our poem alot...
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Yessa!
I'm glad you were able to use your writing ability to help yourself with your hurt, anger and pain.
It's always good self-therapy to write down all your feelings.
Love,
Bell
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Thanks! Yeah, that's one thing I've always done... used writing to express things... I'll have to admit.. I had FUN with this one
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Superb
A very fine write, indeed. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done. -
Your so strong sweetie! Good on you for getting out there! Great poem as per usual!
Love you11
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aaaaaw, I'm sorry you're going through this. Writing is a great way to express your pain, and you've done a great job here. Good luck in the contest!
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