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Cause and Effect

We love Him because He first loved us.
We arise because He raised us from the dust.
We are clean because He washed us, through and through.
Because He had reached down to us we reach out to you.

© 10-1-08

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  • Ana-Andrea
    October 30, 2008

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    Yes, I agree that the title is absolutely perfect. Lovely little poem, and certainly bound to bring a smile to the face of the redeemed! What a lovely reminder.


  • Twins 4 me
    October 5, 2008
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    Great write!! So short but so powerful! Your words speak so much truth!!! Keep it up!!


  • marsu
    October 4, 2008
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    Good writing, not sure about the title though


    • M0ofi3
      October 4, 2008
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      What do you mean?

      The title is perfect. Those who are His are responding to what He has done for us. BeCAUSE of what He did for those who are His, the EFFECT is that His own respond by repentance and obedience. The Bible clearly teaches a spiritual/Biblical form of Cause and Effect.

      Jesus loves you! I'm so sure of this, no one need tell me an opposing thought. My mind's made up.

      Yep, it's closed.


  • heismysong silver member
    October 3, 2008
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    Lord, Help Us...

    ... to have this kind of love, especially to the unlovely!


  • debilynn
    October 3, 2008

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    reminds me of a favorite song:
    Jesus loves me, this i know... for the bible tells me so !!!!! thank you for sharing your talent! God bless you always


  • Samplette gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    Definitely smile worthy. We are so blessed to have Him love us. Thank you for entering the contest. A beautiful write.
    Sam

  • Pisces rainbow
    October 3, 2008

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    lovely verse my friend
    because He had reached down to us we reach out to you
    PROFOUND WISDOM
    God bless my friend...

  • goalsv
    October 3, 2008
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    A great praise and knowledgable piece. The truth of the ages for humans to reflect.

  • mcheadle
    October 2, 2008
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    What beauty is in this phrase of love

    Must have been placed there by The Lord above...mac


  • Warrior of Peace
    October 2, 2008

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    very good

    This is very short but also inspiring. Keep up the good work. You speak the truth. Everyone is loved by him


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    October 2, 2008

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    Perfection!

    Now this should bring a smile to all! This is the shortest, most concise, and most magnificent poem I think I've read of yours! Bravo for this! It's just beyond my being able to praise it & a wonderful praise poem for Father & the Savior! All the best in the Contest. I'm sure you'll do marv!

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