The World
is bad and always sad
another bomb is what
we have. they say things
that give us hope
then yank back on
the end of that rope.
A contest entry
- If You Are A Child Of Today Tell Me What You Feel by storiesuntold.
425 points, ended October 14, 2008, 10 entries
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tell me please
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Short and too the point. I think it could have a little more depth while still having that plain-in-view point. But whatever my opinion is, it was still very good. Great idea's behind it. You said to be honest so there it is.
Tal.
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thanks for being honest and i might add to this poem later!!!!
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We all hear the same things
Being here on this eart for 55 years in a few days I have heard so many things I felt were wrongly done.Even today they lie to get this bill passed through scare tactics for they say it will help all and in reallity it only helps wallstreet for within a few months everything gas food untilities crdit cards everything is going to be hicked up once again and those just getting by will need to group together to make it yet so many that has things today will lose through the lies they continue to tell the public. But the instance it happens the people of this country wont any longer be mad they will demand a new congress and senet with all new people to take over .Its time the people are finally heard for if we arent then I fear the peple will refuse to pay income tax in untill all guilty parties are removed from office and banks that have failed
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