The quintessence of sovereignty
wafts on softly spoken winds
signifying the dawn of sensuality
underlying a keen awareness of
birth
death
and renewal
amid the autumn hues
of internal tranquility
Author notes
discovered freedom
-Thanks Brandon, my love.
Option 1
Image Credit:
http://night-fate.deviantart.com/art/feeling-alive-98503017
A contest entry
- Time For A Quickie! by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended October 4, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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this piece seems to be about finding the right relationship and being renewed... (and the author's notes support that...!) (or 'newed' if one has never been) now if I can only capture that feeling myself... then I'd have an excuse for twirling atop the local hill along Rt. 40...
another poetic piece where you took life and transferred it into a slice of writing...
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yes.. well such transformations don't happen overnight and are a continious process, but I have grown and believe I am a better person since being with him... and yes I love him
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I'd say you should write a 'how-to' book, if there was only a formula to it... "The Ten Steps for a Complete Transformation" hmmm... nice ring to it, and I'll bet it's an original concept...!
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lol, it's definitely a learn as you go program
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I really like your take on the prompt. excellent job with your poem. I really enjoyed reading this. I love the last two lines.
good luck
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Thank you.
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