Oh my love
even you continue with me or not
even you cherish me or not
even you voyage with me or not
inside your borders
I unriddled a note of well-being
which never halts
that
forever
you are
a part of my heart beat
Oh my love...
A contest entry
- The Selflessness of Love... Huge Points! Form Poems. by PerVirtuous.
3000 points, ended October 18, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Lovely picture for such a great write! thanks so much for sharing this one with us! Best wishes to you on future writes! Thanks again!
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This is heartfelt and gives me a warm feeling. Great write!!
Keep up the good writing.
I especially loved this part:
that
forever
you are
a part of my heart beat
Oh my love... -
pretty good
i like it alot...it flows really well too
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A great difference
between selfishness and selflessness of love, I view this poem to be the opposite of selfishness. Congrats on the HM. Frans
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Perfect-ly Unselfless!
... I have been reading down the list of poems and find yours to be true to the meaning. For the fact is: when love conquers a heart, there is no turning aside and regardless of where they are or whom they journey on with ... our soul speaks all for love!
j
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Just lovely. The simplicity of this makes these few words, powerful, yet still gentle, just how unconiditional love is.
good luck and blessings,
Michelle
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true love lasts forever, so they say - and this certainly rang true to that statement. short, but i felt that it said much within those few words - and the animation at teh top is beautiful
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Beautiful yearning ...
and selfless declaration of eternal adoration. How rare.
Love
Myra
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A beautiful image in art and word. Love, never ends, when one loves, it becomes who you are, with or without, love just is.
Wonderful write...the best to you in the contest.
~E.
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I loved the poem and also the picture.
All the best in the contest!
Becks
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beautiful ... to have love without attachment or grasping. this stanza so struck me :
" ... inside your borders
I unriddled a note of well-being
which never halts
that
forever
you are
a part of my heart beat ..."
thank you my friend.
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Beautifully written, A perfect write for the contest parameters. Wonderfully done my friend, best of luck to you...Scott
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Indeed, we sometimes are selfish in love but yet, love is selfish in its nature. Cherishing someone and keep loving them even after we know that they don't return our feelings is kind of unselfish.
Wonderful write as usually used to come from you!
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A heartbeat, so simple, so alive...beautiful poetry...Best of luck in the contest...seems the owner likes your work already!Peace, Rhonda
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This is wonderful and beautiful. Exactly the type of sentiments I am looking for. Bravo!
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