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Fail-safe

golden parachutes
falling from blistering skies
escorting winter

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  • Malabu
    October 5, 2008
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    i'm feeling those blistering skies are our pockets...we shall see

    mal

  • NeedaMuse
    October 5, 2008
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    Bravo

    Very nice job.

    Thanks for entering.


  • Maldronah
    October 2, 2008
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    Streamered 'chute
    Bull's eye
    Smoking hole


    Nuke World Order


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    October 2, 2008

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    Great phrasing and use of terms "Fail safe and "golden parachutes". Spot on the prompt. Love the use of metaphor in this. "blistering skies"...

    Scary...


  • suseann
    October 2, 2008
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    You've said a mouthful in short order here! Going to become a Nuk deep freeze for sure.

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