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A Winter Wreath

So soon will swell the clouds with falling flakes
fluffy snowflakes falling in frothy fields,
frothier fields of questions by the chimney fire.
Fiery debates within the swirling snow,
swirls snowy winds past the frosted windows
windows into winters cheery warmth,
warming near the open fire.

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  • Eusebius
    October 2, 2008

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    bravo

    Very lovely winter piece with superb alliteration I should add! An excellent poem! I absolutely loved it, loved it! bravo... bravo... bravo...


  • suseann
    October 2, 2008

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    I'm not ready for prime time of Winter yet. Never am. But this weave with its eluding to comeradery and a fireside chat gives warm thoughts.Better snow than icy streets though.This form is a good unique one.