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Dowjones

rising meteor
kindled investors hopes
pocketed debris

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haiku

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  • Malabu
    October 5, 2008
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    certainly food for thought ...this is an excellent ku
    mal

  • NeedaMuse
    October 5, 2008

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    Interesting

    The image of a rising meteor carries extra water for you here, though 'pop-bottle rocket' or some such would make more sense.

    Thanks for entering.


  • badnovocaine
    October 2, 2008

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    Oh gosh its so true....
    I thought it was interesting that you said "pocketed debris" at the very end.
    This is a nice Haiku.
    Good luck in the contest.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    October 2, 2008
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    Great metaphor. It sure did...


  • Black Narcissus gold member
    October 2, 2008
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    Great Haiku.

    Amazing how so few words can say so much.

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