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Take My Hand

You're a leader
not a follower
so just relax
take my hand.

Let me lead you
to a promise land
clear your mind
take my hand.

Walk beside me
get to know me
I can protect you
I can love you

Feel my fingers
embraced in yours
imagine our hearts beating,
beating together as one.

Feeling our energy
within my fingertips
longing to understand you
wishing to touch you, love you.

Just relax
let me lead
melting together,
kiss me.

Pushing you to new heights
you've never been before
rising so high; it's scary
feelings growing as lofty as clouds.

Brains fogging like
morning mountain valley's
emotions steaming like
that of a hot spring

Trust me, love me
I'll conduct our symphony
we can create majestic music
if you'll only take my hand.

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  • xSarahx
    October 2, 2008
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    Aww, this is really cute. It's always hard to let someone else lead the way when we've been used to a certain way for so long. I like it a lot, the similies of how high your feelings are growing for each other, it's really cute, and creates a bubbly image! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.


    • brokenpoet
      October 5, 2008
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      Thanks so much for the comment Sarah. I was going to enter your contest, but I'm telling you I must be pretty technologically challenged, well I already knew I was, but now I realize I am moreso than ever...and still couldn't figure it out. When I get some time though I plan to read some of the entries as I'm sure they are very good.

      How are things with you?


      -Melissa