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Echoes

Watching the 401k that I promised I wouldn't touch
dwindle to a shadow of itself;
having an expresso-fueled free-ranging discussion on answers for Iraq
and realizing there aren't any.
Talking with my dad about a man he had a fight with back in grade school
and feeling that today he doesn't know who I am.
Spending Saturday night alone at home with my cat, who loves TV,
because I don't feel moved to expose myself as an essentially boring man.

I hear echoes of a formerly full life
forced into remission by circumstances dire.
I look for a means to blow these doubts away
I guess I just need to find a reason to believe.

I'm looking for a corner that I can turn
that will turn black-and-white back into a colorful life,
and turn my memory echoes into full-throated song,
bring a smile back to my face, and hope to my soul.

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prompt is: "echoes"

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  • Dalaney gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    ...remember when you said i touched
    a place in your heart, that it might
    not have been intentional, but there
    it was in the form of a poem? you
    are touching me back...

    Love, lane


  • silverscent gold member
    October 3, 2008
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    Your prompt is "echoes" from http://allpoetry.com/poem/4630395