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Silent feelings

I would watch your smile from far
Though it was easy to open up my heart
I'd rather felt it safe to love you
Silently, like the selfless sun shine...

You made me feel the one I was...
letting me dream like a soaring falcon
into the skies of joys and delight
Silently,though like the passing wind...

Author notes

Love is best felt silently...I guess

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 3, 2008

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    love is torture when kept under wraps, but sometimes that is all you can do, til you are ready to un-warp it keep it flowing and good luck in the contest