solitary walks among the rich harvest of
autumn reminds me of your touch
embracing with growing abandon and the
sublime colors that promise
soon all will change and a winter's dream
consoles my mind
if only we could find autumn in the spring
Author notes
picture prompt
Option #1 A from photobucket.com
A contest entry
- BIG Points; Lots Of Options-- All About AUTUMN* by perfectsunset.
1800 points, ended October 14, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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warm and comforting !
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Wow this was brilliant.
Very thought-provoking and
beautifully descriptive.
Lovely imagery, depth & notions.
Very originally crafted & clever.
Loved it!!
Thanks for sharing & best of luck
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This is your subconsciousness at work.I think?
'If only we could find autumn in the spring'
What a great way to wish for rebirth.
Once conscious and unconscious mind comes together: you have excellent thoughts and poems.
Congrats as your step into this new world.
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"solitary walks among the rich harvest of
autumn reminds me of your touch"
Lovely!
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