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Unchained

Life force uncontained by earth
Awash in endless sunset’s birth
That burgeons over the fields of praise
Firing memories of halcyon days
When life was good and never still
That bird of summers cry was shrill
When promises were almost seen
In the sound of colour in the green
Growing louder through the  twilight
It burns the night, it burns the night.

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    October 17, 2008

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    good rhyme and flow to this finely penned poem refering to the sound of colors and the day. good write

    thank you for your entry and good luck in the judging


  • dustookie2
    October 16, 2008

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    Another brilliant take on this beautiful picture prompt. Your lines flow with ease of rhyme and when spoken aloud a pleasure to hear the words come back to me. Thank you. Good luck in the contest. Well crafted.