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The Struggle and Pain

Your arms around me tight,
but in the distance I can hear,
they're coming for me now.

I feel my arms being torn off,
my legs the same,
screaming in piercing pain,
as my heart is torn between all.

I'm ripped apart,
and I finally think it's over--

And then one more comes for his share,
but there's nothing left,
except a patch from my dress.

This may kill me yet.

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  • SilverQ
    October 2
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    Scary

    and flows well. Keep up the good work.