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Who am I ? who are you?

Who am I ? who are you?  A little known and more unknown!!!


A little brittle in soul and Very hard in hand and heart
Sounding melodious in silence and sweeping silence in all terrific  sounds

What all scriptures quoted and  all customs and traditions revealed?

Who are you? What am I ?better known and to the best unknown

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Words Of Wisdom By Contemporary Spiritual Teachers : Eckhart Tolle

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  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    October 3, 2008

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    Great words of wisdom in your poem and think the repetition works really well! Good luck in the contest!


  • maa gold member
    October 3, 2008
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    I enjoyed the way you left the "great question about the great unknowne" unanswered, only offering some discrete pointers, some poetic hints about the nature of "i am" ...
    I loved the lines :

    "Sounding melodious in silence and sweeping silence in all terrific sounds"

    thank you so much,
    maa