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700 billion



hold on-

one more pig
for the barrel to roll



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have you heard what's added in the bill? more pork

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  • Olivias Violin
    October 20, 2008
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    political haiku! clever


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    October 8, 2008
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    Oink! Congrats on the silver trophy!


  • Mirthryl
    October 6, 2008
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    Staggering...beyond my ability to even begin to grasp! Succinct condemnation, well applied.


  • Tirrell
    October 5, 2008

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    Um a few million for wooden arrows, a few for imported yarn...Why? Why stuff a bill with such dribble...Perhaps if we burn money to stay warm we would have the same problem... Wonderful and thoughtfull 'Ku congrats on silver, this brings in such vivid images.


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    October 5, 2008
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    Very clever and insightful! Congrats on the Silver Trophy!

    Dennis

  • NeedaMuse
    October 5, 2008
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    Excellent

    We can get the oil mess from this one, too. Trifecta!

    Thanks for entering.


  • suseann
    October 3, 2008

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    Yep! Every revision amended adds to the weight of porky's coffer.It's the ol'"if it's ruined,gimy my piece of pork chop quick before it's all gone!"


  • Maldronah
    October 2, 2008
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    Lard is great,
    lard is good.
    Rich eat fat pork.
    Poor eat dog food.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    October 2, 2008
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    Yum! Sausage...

    Good one, spot on.


  • Venugopal gold member
    October 2, 2008
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    harsh..good luck

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