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My Heart Breaks Like A Crayon

With each crayon
you made me feel

pink was for the kisses
and the happiness that followed

yellow was for the smile
you always made me show

green was for the times when I was sick
you'd never leave to go

purple was for the
forever-after you promised

blue was for the tears
and sadness

white was for the
pure innocence I used to have

black and red are for the pain
and heartache I only have left

...all crayons tell a story...

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  • written-in-ink
    October 4, 2008

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    a nice place to take it

    thank you for sharing

    it thought that you did a very good job with it

    thank you and good luck


  • Joy.To.The.World
    October 2, 2008
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    I like this its really good, i like that you used crayons, very creative. Good write.