Blues eyes stare into
Dark corners of my soul
Reading my secrets
Like the Dead Sea Scrolls
Breaking me, Desperately
Until I am nothing but a hole
These things I can't undo
Haunt my memory
Just like that November day
And so flagrantly
She abuses my delusions
corrupting every part of me
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Nice write. I like this a lot. Nice rhyming. Not sure what you meant by "until I am nothing but a hole" though. Liked the rest of it though and would love to know what you meant by that line.
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It's basically like being empty.
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Really good flow and rhyme
Good write.
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