I知 not weak
Not crumbling upon myself
Not even collapsing in your arms
Though you池e not what I seek.
Protecting the world from me
I知 fighting you, scaring you,
Suffocating you until you let me go.
Why won稚 you set me free?
Hoping I値l disappear,
You know its not happening
But I知 still not free yet,
Held within your karmic sphere.
Over, gone, vanished, missing.
Are you going to forget me?
Are you going to let the wind sweep me
Away from my reminiscing?
Away from you?
Away from me?
Author notes
Sooo, don't know why I wrote this but apparently I did. It's not very good, don't bother telling me it is. I know the poem develops with my thoughts. Goes from 'me' being held captive to 'me' being swept away with time, and then this 'me' asking the 'you' how 'you' could let 'me' (and in turn 'us' because 'me' has become part of 'you') fade away into nothingness..
otherwise, I don't really know.. sure Bandy will know and probably enjoy telling me what i think because she always seems to know. Loves to her.
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Lol.
I think. Well, the two sides of you. I only think this because I know what it's like. Um, dunno if you know but was diagnosed with borderline personality disorder awhile ago and some "professionals" I've talked to since then seem to think I've broken into a few personalities. But so I think I know the fighting between two of them.
I don't know. Probably just rambling.
But it also makes me think about fairyland, that that's where part of you wants to go and part of you is trying to stop it.
I would understand if that were true, but I'm just stabbing in the dark.
Nice background, is that a new one here?
Love ya,
Bandy. ♥
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Complexing
Well sweet sista of mine you done it again. you all go and write a very complexcing complicated write and you know I wlays love em. its 3:30 am up here and I find myself completley coming up with the whole concept that you are tlaking a lover and how you want to become one yet you are unsure of if that is truly what your heart desires. thats just a ramblingbro for ya givin his thoughts. I do like the poets reasoning downb below as she makes more sense than I do. but anyw ays to me its about love andkindered souls and uniting and wanting to become one and well theres the age ole quesation of do I want that or not ect. any ways a wonderfully penned poem all round either way. keep writing
Luffles you always, Bro 
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To face yourself and the past is hard, to let go of the past burdens is even harder to do. The weight will be carried untill it is let go..
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