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The ghost

      You think it's a lengend
      Because you can't imagine
      Something like that
      Of the fate that you have.

      If your birthday
      Is on the 14th of May
      You'd better flee
      And jump into the sea

      Because the ghost is here
      On the 14th of May
      You will have fear
      Because the ghost is near

      When the clocks strike tweleve
      The ghost and it's eleves
      Come out to your house
      And wander about

      The elves will make you freeze
      Any time they please
      You can't  even scream
      As the elves made you freeze

      You stand there forever
      And people ask:
      Whatevers the matter?
      But you can't even say
      Even one word
     
      The ghost however
      Is even more clever
      He gets out his dagger
      And eats you up
      Just like a really hungry pup

      He magics away
      Your remains
      He gains
      Your body

      If you don't belive me
      And think my brain is the size of a pea
      Then on the 14th of may
      The ghost shall eat you until
      The remains
      Like bones will be magiced away
      So beware!
      You're going to have a real scare!         
   

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  • Autumn Rain13
    November 3, 2008
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    Very scary... Excellent write! I really enjoyed the first stanza, keep up the great work!


  • pop123
    October 2, 2008
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    OOH honestly thats kind of scary! Thank goodness my birthdays in June (missed by one month!) .anyway nice write, good rhyme, and kind of funny.

    • angelaononchan
      October 3, 2008
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      I wrote this because I went hiking and I saw a house which was abandoned. My parents didn't let me go inside so I made up a reason why.