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willow

enchanted
by the gentle flow of water
I sit upon the rocks
and watch
as the mermaids swim by
laughing and splashing
each other in their play.

And I
smile.

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  • SoulWhispher
    October 2, 2008
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    Well Done,

    This shoud be a contest winner, blessings John


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 2, 2008

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    This is just lovely and sounds like such a peaceful c]scene, so really fits well with the picture.
    All the best with this
    Gaylene