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Cut the Vein

Cut the vein and let the blood flow,
Dance with no feet, let your heart glow.
Drink from the faucet and the lake.
Dive into my angelic body, to take,
True love from me, from which I’ll shake.
I’ll let you fulfill your dreams,
But change your ways, it seems.
To drive that hurtful soul into a new one,
One that smiles and laughs,
And does not torment me.

If you want me in my
Original form,
You’ll need to say why,
Show me that you’re warm,
In your heart.
Don’t destroy me with
Your hatred.
I will show you
How to breathe,
How to see.
But warm me with your spirit first.
The love you show me is much worse.

If you love me,
Talk to me,
Don’t disrespect me.
True love is all I want.
Stay away if you don’t have it.

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Again, I hope you enjoy this piece of poetry and appreciate it as much as I feel to it--connect with it, so say. I was really into this when I was writing it... but if you don't like it, tell me so and why.

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Comments

  • mcfreeman
    October 4, 2008
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    The title put me off...But

    this is a wonderful write....hard/real and soft/ideal.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    October 2, 2008

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    Love......so many feeling that are involved with this one word Great write hon!

    If you love me,
    Talk to me,
    Don’t disrespect me.
    True love is all I want.
    Stay away if you don’t have it.



  • cre8tiv-writer
    October 2, 2008
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    The feelings of love, hurt and pain seem to drip from every word...great emotional write!!