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An Unwelcomed Guest

Petty is the fool who reads others' self pity
And claims to know, without actually knowing!

Down here, where you are?
Why, I had no idea such a low, had lowered.
Come on! Sit on my lap and listen with such intent
As your secret hand pierces my mouth with your label!
I do not ask for your company, yet you find your way here,
Pulling up the first chair and cozying up to my leg.

No more room, you say?
Why, I had no idea hell was a party of one!
If ever a time where you are feeling sorry for yourself
And all the "serious issues" that you encompass do arise,
Forgive me, for your, quite pathetic invitation
To your elegant "hatred of life" pity-party
Will be burned upon arrival.

It was quite sweet of you, though, to glorify my pains
As "pathetic dime store pissing and moaning." -So beautifully said, my dear.

Please, though, make sure that when you step foot on my welcome mat next,
You come armed and stay long enough to say it to my face!



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response to someone here on AP...that's all i will say

honesty always appreciated

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    January 15

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    WOW!!! That is anger at it's finest, seeping out of your lines....haven't been here, reading your stuff in a while...sorries...


  • Glass- Heart
    October 3, 2008
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    holy crap

    that was deep was that directed to me


  • moluv10
    October 2, 2008
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    Piercing write here. I'm sorry someone has hurt you. I wish you nothing but the best. Take care.


  • Number 13
    October 2, 2008

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    Awe, sorry people aren't so kind Teddy Bear. ♥
    Love you Miss you.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 2, 2008

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    Wow.. sounds like a right ass to me hun!! You tell them!!!

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