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Coloured Candy Flavors

Coloured candy flavors
Of a heart one of a kind
shredded of the crimson,
azure skies we find

That from every different point
and every different tip
a mass parade of parodies
come lined up on a ship

Which circles tunnels in the dark
mirroring the lost
The rainbow shell of memories
the fiery and the frost

And hand in hand through hallowed halls
Of Misery's delight
The life brooding inside us
wakes in the passion of the night

Amidst the emerald raindrops
fall the tawny golden suns
that bright the years of yesterdays
and Hour's Will yet done.

From these thousand perfumed lights
of the many yester-years
The shredded hearts of coloured past
come back and form this, dear

Unclouded love we never lost
Where sky and sea collide
The shredded thoughts of lullabies
Where our young hearts reside

No matter how we shape it
No matter how we write
No matter how we draw it
It all turns out alright

From amongst the many scrapings
of the colours of our hearts
The love of past just makes us strong
Forming our life long art.

A contest entry

just hope you enjoy and find your own personal meanings, as usual, comments on how you liked it or critique are welcomed, just be honest lol

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  • lovingpoet
    March 12
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    Oh your poem is very great thank you


  • written-in-ink
    October 4, 2008

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    thank you so much for sharing

    i love the take that you had on the prompt

    i thought that it was very nice

    and i just wanted to say

    thannk you and good luck