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More Than a Tree

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Look closer can’t you see
It’s me not just a tree
Trapped in wood for prosperity
Enchantment was my destiny
Only true love shall prevail
to eliminate this wooden jail

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    I really like this piece! Great sentiment here! Great job, poet! Thanks so much for entering my contest. Be proud of your work! It’s an honor to have it shown here!


    • smonte19124 gold member
      October 15, 2008
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      Oh My Goodness! Thank you so much for the honor of receiving the Gold I am astouded but so very pleased. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 13, 2008

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    oh yes, it is a tree with her loss of beauty, but again spring she will be in her most perfect shape again, good luck in this contest
    Linda


    • smonte19124 gold member
      October 13, 2008
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      Thank you for taking the time to read and commenting. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • SoulPrincess
    October 7, 2008
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    I liked your poem. Simple, but deep


    • smonte19124 gold member
      October 10, 2008
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      Thank you so much for taking the time to read and for the lovely comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann

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