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River Streams of My Emotions

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River Streams of My Emotions

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

Flipping through the highway pages of love,

capturing the missing choruses of your love song.

Oh God! The beauty of your art makes me speechless...Unknown.

The clouds closing in and the butterflies robbing syringes

of falling trickling rain.

As I unravel the petals, one by one.

Purposely, I deliver you the valentine of kisses.

Just press your heart beats next to mine and let impressions play tabla.

As I throw my head back and let you capture that perfect picture

of me dying in a romantic tale played by intuition.

As I leave notes on your ideas, and make a proposal to chase away fears.

Oh God! The beauty of your art makes me speechless...Unknown.

I took off my heart and snapped it around you wrist,

 so you can tell the time I will be arriving

in Mount Lucania for a kiss.

 

 

Writers Block Stages

Julia L. Clark

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

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River Streams of My Emotions

I loved this propmt so I had
to force something out this all i can get
out. Julia

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 14, 2008
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    Indeed a heart warming entry..thanks ...


  • darell
    October 4, 2008

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    Awesome!!

    Omg! Julia this was so powerful.
    A rhapsody of passionate and romantic love.
    You write as good or better than the best
    of them baby. I love this side of you so much.
    It reminds me of your dad. You and He are more
    alike than you think. Its mostly your negective
    environment that robbed you of so many things.
    The good part is that you're so strong and
    powerful inside to keep down. You will get back
    everything that you deserve and more.
    Be encouraged Julia and never give up on you.
    I LOVE YOU PASSIONATELY.


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    October 4, 2008

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    your block brings out another side of julia. Which is good. I can tell cvause you think hard when you have your blocks. This one is just that your thoughts. I like this one too.


  • onesugar gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    Were's the writers block then sis

    beautiful as always sis and a total pleasure to read.
    I love the last lines only you could come up with such as this, creates a beautiful picture.
    Good luck hon
    ~sugar~ ♥


  • faderman1959
    October 2, 2008

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    I think the block is over with this one. It was very romantic! Leaving a warm feeling all over. Beautifully done!

    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      October 2, 2008
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      you know what i must agree hell when can i start writing 8 poems a day again though crap this one a day stuff is getting on my nerves thanks babe


  • D Saul So Sexy
    October 2, 2008

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    ma i think you reaching the end of writers block huh? to me this isn't but of course this is your stages you are very romantic in my eyes good luck ga D


  • In Too Deep1
    October 2, 2008

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    Beautifully penned baby girl. I love the language and the vibe of your expressions in this piece. I have been a bit of a ghost lately, but I will be free of work soon to give you more attention. I have missed your music and really enjoyed each note of this piece. Best wishes in the comp

    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      October 2, 2008
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      L hi hon yes you have been neglecting me crap but make sure when you have your first off day i get to whisper something in your ear thanks hon


  • Levesta
    October 2, 2008

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    MY SIS THIS SO PRETTY AND THIS IS WHAT U CALL WRITER BLOCK THAN I WOULD LOVE TO WRITE LIKE THIS WHEN I COME DOWN WITH IT BEAUTIFULLY WRITER

  • Angelshadow
    October 1, 2008
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    Its a good poem, do not feel so discouraged.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 1, 2008

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    Gorgeous work here sweetie!
    I love your "sleepy head" background!
    LMAO! This is truly a beautiful and
    heartfelt write. I loved the last three
    lines in this. Well done and good luck
    to you with this one!




    Jeremy0826

    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      October 1, 2008
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      thanks J don't be laughing i love this pick a many that will appear in my second book i so love the last line to i wonder how on earth i thought of that its because I am jewels thanks J


  • hotchocolate gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    ahhhh....so sweet and settle and I loved it! Great job sis

    I took off my heart and snapped it around you wrist,
    so you can tell the time I will be arriving
    in Mount Lucania for a kiss.

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