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Lost Lover

Missing image
Oh she went to meet her lover beneath the sicamore tree,
He never showed her soul passed indeed.
To be found this day encased within she weaps,
          "love never seen"
     

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    I love the concept of this piece! Nicely done, poet! Thanks so much for entering my contest. Be proud of your work! It’s an honor to have it shown here!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 13, 2008
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    very different take on this picture, good luck in this contest
    Linda


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 3, 2008
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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    This sure does look like a lady! Your words fit with this beautifully!'s


  • Pearl-1
    October 2, 2008
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    brill poem
    good luck in the contest xx


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    October 1, 2008
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    wild love turned her into timber,,great image and super poem . good luck P..X

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