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totally

sunrise smile
greets
mother beams
her pride soars
world changes
as her heart
fixates
totally

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15 words; prompt- white child

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 2, 2008
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    Just precious!... x

  • AnAverageGirl
    October 1, 2008
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    I love it! For a fifteen word poem it is amazing!


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    Yes it does...there is no stronger or deeper love...how beautiful your words are...they touch a mothers heart...excellent...
    best to you!
    mystic