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~Cap'ain Plank~


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(music enhanced)(essential to poem)
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Ha ha,.I'm cap'ain Plank,
Of the Barnacle Bill ship.
Aye, matey, I'll be seein' ya soon,
As yur in fer a bit of a dip.

Don' push yer luck, I say,
Or you'll be swimin' wit' da fishies.
Uh-h-h, hold dat thought,.......
(did I say fishies? o-ow, me wishies)

M-m-m, me changed me mind, bloke.
Bring me back dem fishies whole,...
I'll pardon ya, make ya da cook,...
Tuna would be quite nice in me bowl!

Pur-r-r-rfect!
(Darn hook,.argh-h-h,
Can't sharpen me claws!
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Ahoy Mateys!!
Dancin' to da music,
Dem fishies are MINE!!
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photo of pirate kitten, courtesy of Slayer for contest

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  • SpeakLove93
    April 23

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    So Cute!

    This is such a cute little piece! I love it! Absolutely impossible to read without without a good chuckle. Very adorable and thank you for entering!


  • JustFallingApart
    February 6

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    that is the most absolute cutest poem I have ever read, hands down. The pictures are just so cute! including the whole poem. I really really enjoyed reading this, you did an amazingly awsome job on this. Keep the pen flowing and I hope all is well

  • jadeangyal
    December 11, 2008

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    Way cute! This is a great take on the picture. If this poem doesn't deserve gold, then I don't know what does. I like the rhyme of fishies and wishies. Best of luck!


  • BathedInBlood
    October 16, 2008

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    Great!

    OMFG! I fell in love with the kittehs! Even though I couldn't hear the music, I'm sure it went well with the poem! Keep writing!


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    Soooooooo cute !

    Love this one What a groover this cat is Good luck in this contest


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    Well this sure was a cute piece and it sure did make me smile.
    I love the animation and the background.
    ADORABLE!
    Thanks for entering and good luck in contest.
    -Mandi


  • Kazytc
    October 3, 2008

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    Awww How Comically Cute Grace!

    This is adorable Grace, and soooo comicaly cute and I love the Pirate lingo which is very authentic too, wow brilliant, love it.
    The graphics on the page are good too.

    Loved this bit...

    Don' push yer luck, I say,
    Or you'll be swimin' wit' da fishies.
    Uh-h-h, hold dat thought,.......
    (did I say fishies? o-ow, me wishies)

    You have got it very spot on and chatty, great work and very original. Bravo, write on and the very best of luck in all your contests with this and all of your other poetic masterpieces... and they are just that! Hope you win Gold in them all you well deserve to!
    Poetic Hugs & Meows!
    Kaz.
    Kazytc XXXXX


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    October 2, 2008

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    This is super adorable!! Aww I absolutely love it!! Them cats are my favorite!! This is so cute!! You did anamzing job writing this!! Great details and purrffect descriptions!! You did a beautiful job!! This is incredible!! I LOVE IT!! Your background and pictures are adorable!!


  • Cannonsfire
    October 1, 2008

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    LOL...the animated gif is priceless and the poem is great. Thanks for the entry. C

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