Remember when i was a little girl an youd push me on the swing
I swear to everyone you were the king
Remember I was your little girl
Your princess the one with the curl
Remember we did everything together
You always said i was clever.
To this day i still swear you king
And im your princess your little girl.
We still do everything together
you still say im so clever
Dad ive always appreciated you I know youll always be there
I know this because you always care.
Im taking time out of my day to say i love you
And appreciate you every day.
I LOVE YOU ALWAYS AND FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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500 points, ended April 23, 2009, 47 entries
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WOW great poem! I wrote one very similar to my dad!! Its called 'Hi Blue Eyes'. Anyway amazing poem - - ~ ~ Keep up the great work!
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These are great, keep up the good work! I love it!
It's so great how you keep it what you remember! -
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Wow nice job. Liked it keep up the good work you've got tallent. And I wounldn't tell my parents I love you but that's just me, nice job.
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thanx
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Why i wrote it
I wrote this because i nevr tell my dad i appreciate him as much as i really do!!!!!!! THANK YOU DAD!!
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