As I enter the forest of my mind
It is the memory of you I find
Within a dream of yours and mine
Beneath pure skies in a distant time
Author notes
30 Words. Image courtesy of contest host.
A contest entry
- Gimme 30 Brilliant Words Picture Prompt by Paloszoo.
450 points, ended October 15, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I'm not a fan of rhyme, but this was very lovely. Not forced at all. Great meter. Just beautiful! Thanks so much for entering my contest. Be proud of your work! It’s an honor to have it shown here!
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so good 30 words of your thoughts on the image, nice to have and see different opinions on it,good luck in her contest
Linda
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Beautiful write here
Very nice indeed with such feelings
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Thank you for dropping in!!!
And thanks for the kudos! I'll be over your way asap, gotta run now so take good care!! Peace, Cyn
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Excellent use of 30 words--
Good flow of the unforced rhyming verse
Nice take on the picture.
Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!
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excellent~
Love this sweetie
It reads to me like a wonderful fairy tale..made me smile so.........
Love it and the pic that goes with it...
Best of luck in the contest a winner in my book
Hugs
Your new sis
Susan~~~
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Thank you, Susan!
I appreciate your stopping in to read my work - as always!! Take care, and thanks again!!! Peace Always, Cyn
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